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The German didn't want to believe it. They looked so similar, both having the same features and even walk. Yet, this wasn't his little Italian. No, not at all. Italy wouldn't sit like that. He wouldn't have such a sinister smile in place nor be boldly flipping a knife in the air like that.

Germany turned to the single person who could be responsible for this. "England, what is the meaning of this!?" He snapped, trying to keep the shaking worry from his voice.

The blonde Englishman shook his head. "I honestly couldn't tell you," he said. "I haven't even messed with my black magic lately."

"It's Oliver's fault," the dark Italian piped in, speaking for the first time. He tossed his knife into the care, catching it with ease. "The idiota nation decided to call a war in the middle of our meeting, blasting me with Dio maledetto black magic." Italy sighed, jumping up from his perk on the table, placing his knife back in its holster. "No doubt Lutz and Koyo are fighting those vile Allies as we speak."

"What did you call us!?" America snapped.

"Al-Alfred," Canada whispered, "please stop."

"I will not stop Mattie! He called us vile!"

The darker Italy chuckled, causing everyone to look at him. "Oh, don't mind me, continue fighting. This is the most interesting thing I've seen since appearing here," his smile turned sinister. "Much more fun than watching this boring meeting continue. And, for the record, I called you cowardly, not vile, idiota. I knew James wasn't the smartest, but doubted his second player would be this stupid."

"Who are you calling stupid, coward?!" America yelled.

"America-san," Japan hesitantly interrupted, "should we not focus on what Italy-kun said. Perhaps who is this James?"

"Oui," France leaned forward, "also, what did you call Alfred, a 'first player'?"

"Si," Italy nodded. "You may not know of us, but we know all about you. You are the first players, 1Ps, the first world to be created. We, I, am the second players, 2Ps, the second world to be created.

"Interesting," France muttered, rubbing his bearded chin. "Tell me, Feliciano, what is so different from us '1Ps' and you '2Ps'?"

"My name isn't Feliciano," Italy growled, "don't compare me to that vile weakling! I am Alessandro!"

"Ja," Germany's jaw was tight as he wondered what could have happened to his Italy to turn him into this. "Alessandro, then, how are our worlds so different?"

Alessandro tilted his head, chuckling darkly. "My word, it is so much more fun," he answered simply before letting out a bloodcurdling laugh that even had Germany shivering in his boots.

"Italy," Ludwig whispered, "What could have happened to you?"
Short first chapter, I know, but this is more of a prolouge to give an idea what's going on.

So, I've never really seen anything like this(that wasn't a reader insert) so decided to try and make one. This is where 2P!Italy and 1P!Italy and switched between worlds(and possibly more characters in the future). I put it in general fiction because there are a couple catagories it goes in.

Multiple pairings. Main one you'll notice is GerIta, 2P!GerIta, and Ger2P!Ita. Others may come into play later.

The 2Ps are getting different names. I pick the names either because they are popular for the culture or popular for the fandom. As they come out, I'll leave a list of them.

:bulletwhite: Names :bulletwhite:
2P!Italy--Alessandro
2P!Germany--Lutz
2P!Japan--Koyo
2P!England--Oliver

:bulletred: Translations :bulletred:

:bulletpurple: Italian
idiota--Idiot
Dio maledetto--God Damned
Vile--Cowardly

:bulletblue: French
Oui--Yes

:bulletpurple: Chapter 1: Here
:bulletpurple: Chapter 2: [link]
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Belarus-natasha Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  New Deviant Professional General Artist
Next chapter!
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lavenderglowangel Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Photographer
I thought his 2p name was Luciano 
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mochikouhai Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Student Artist
Well, Luciano isn't his CANON name because 2P's aren't canon characters. I mean, some of the designs are drawn by Hima but it's not in the manga or anime.. And Luciano is a name that the fans made
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BlackSummerDreams Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MORE! XD
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PrincessJudai Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014
Love it but, 2p Italy's name isn't Alessandro, it's Luciano.
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Lillica424 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Artist
Great job! But I'm just saying this.. 2P!Italy's name is Luciano...
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ChildoftheBlankPage Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student
There wasn't an offical name when I wrote this. Luciano isn't even official. It is a name accepted by majority of the fandom. It's like saying GerIta is canon when it's only one-sided canon.
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Lillica424 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student Artist
Oh Okay!
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SunnySunshine203 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Actually the 2p names is diff for the real ones but nice story btw :) 
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ChildoftheBlankPage Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student
Well, I didn't know that they had been given "real" names. I assumed that there was fan names that the fans had accepted. Technically, none of it is canon except 2p Italy, Germany, and Japan and only there designs. Unless something has changed since I checked.
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SunnySunshine203 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh ok thank you for telling me O-O........ ((So polite.... 'WAIT' I didn't even know what ya say !! *reads again* okay I got it now!! :D well not me my sister did XD))
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NekoLoverNile Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow
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LawyerGirl227 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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COWWE123 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013

omg this is so good!! I luv it need more

 

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UsamiHotaru Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
ChildoftheBlankPage-san. I want to write journal . His name is 2P!Axis and 2P!Allies meet other nations . Can it be a little based on your story Meet his opposite ? I will credit you . :)
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ChildoftheBlankPage Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student
Sure. Can you send me a link when you are done, though? I'd like to read it :D
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UsamiHotaru Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
ok and thank you :D
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lintang1412 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so interesting!! I haven't read any 2p fics than this before, and I like this!! Please continue!! >W<
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DaBloodehDemonKitteh Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Albeit short, I do like this. Off I go to the second part ;)
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DummkopfGermany Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Writer
SOOO AWESOME!
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gir131 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
NNEEEED :iconmoarplz:
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ChildoftheBlankPage Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student
:lol: more to come once internet is being kind again
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gir131 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!!
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hetalialover191 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
one word CONTINUE
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ChildoftheBlankPage Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student
Gladly. Will do once my internet problem is fixed
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hetalialover191 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that sucks but YAY
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IceSpider101 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Wooh! I like this!! Please write more!!! ^^
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ChildoftheBlankPage Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student
Soon. Once my internet is back up, I'll have the next part up
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IceSpider101 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
I'll be keeping my eye out for it! Great job so far!
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SereneDash Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I need moar!!!
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ChildoftheBlankPage Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student
Soon it will come, swear. Just having internet problems at the moment
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